Garrrrr....I did write this.

Tidus_the_Almighty · 01-22-2006, 07:40 AM

When I see her on the street,
I cannot remove my gaze.
Whenever she walks past me,
My thoughts are gone from my head.
No matter what I do,
She will be there.
The way she talks to me,
The way she walks with me,
I feel like I cannot get away.
This girl is the sweetest ever.
She will always go to the store with you.
She will always keep you company.
No matter what she does,
No matter how she does it,
I will always feel the same.
I think I can share anything with her,
Including my deepest secrets and darkest dreams.
She will stay with you to the finish.
I will never leave her side.

I know, it's kinda "blah"......but I wrote it from the heart.

TheLoveDoctor · 01-22-2006, 12:27 PM

I really like it a lot, especially the realistic allusions. It is a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing! Rep point!

Ralfie de Wolfie · 01-22-2006, 11:32 PM

Very nice.

Tidus_the_Almighty · 01-23-2006, 07:20 PM

Hey, Thanks Guys

01-22-2006, 07:40 AM	#1 (permalink)
Tidus_the_Almighty Virgin Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Zanarkand Posts: 5	Garrrrr....I did write this. When I see her on the street, I cannot remove my gaze. Whenever she walks past me, My thoughts are gone from my head. No matter what I do, She will be there. The way she talks to me, The way she walks with me, I feel like I cannot get away. This girl is the sweetest ever. She will always go to the store with you. She will always keep you company. No matter what she does, No matter how she does it, I will always feel the same. I think I can share anything with her, Including my deepest secrets and darkest dreams. She will stay with you to the finish. I will never leave her side. I know, it's kinda "blah"......but I wrote it from the heart.

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01-22-2006, 12:27 PM	#2 (permalink)
TheLoveDoctor Moderator Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: California Posts: 531	I really like it a lot, especially the realistic allusions. It is a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing! Rep point!

01-22-2006, 11:32 PM	#3 (permalink)
Ralfie de Wolfie Virgin Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Some forest... Posts: 5	Very nice.

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Garrrrr....I did write this.

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